Production log of initial idea

Production log

 Dilly: We had to go through all our notes to get the gist of our idea.

 Zahra: We have to add more characters

Dilly: I’m going through all the events in the story that happening and writing it down in the blog and thinking of any change that needs to be done. Try and add elements of my idea.

Zahra: The main antagonist is the person who had lost his daughter at the age of 4 and now obsessed with the number 4.

 Dilly: There’s a family and the parents die. It turns out that the son who is 15 murders his parents but no one knows. The sister is the protagonist who has an abusive boyfriend and everyone thinks he murdered the parents as he had gotten in an argument with them the day before. He son could be the antagonist as well.

 Zahra: Make up an antagonists name

 Dilly: Damon is the antagonist’s name. Why did he take his son? What did the protagonist do to the antagonist to make him want to take his son?

 Zahra: Find out who the other characters are. His divorced wife.

 Dilly: Ohh yeah the divorced wife can be the sympathetic character

 Zahra: We’ve got a sympathetic character

 Dilly: Explosives to bomb parks.

 Zahra: We have to think of a suitable location.

 Dilly: How did the antagonist’s daughter die? You put me off my mojo.

 Zahra: We’re having 4 bombs

Dilly: Could the protagonist kill the daughter maybe he had alcohol problems. And when he was driving he was in an accident that had the antagonist and his daughter inside the other car.

Dilly: I’m going to add in the divorced wife. We need 4 characters.

 Gurjit: She could have another child. That child is going to have the typical thoughts of a brother.

Gurjit: The child’s name is going to be Ben. Ben could be Damons surrogate son.

Dilly: Car crash

 Zahra: We should start off where he actually loses his daughter.

 Dilly: We could have a toy car

Zahra: I’ve got a good idea what we could do for act 2.

 Gurjit: He kidnaps the guy’s son. We jump in date.

Zahra: We could add a flashback to show when his daughter died.

 Dilly: How are we going to show the son getting kidnapped?

 Gurjit: The son puts the bomb in the park. We see the son do this and he has a flashback of his childhood. The child is under the bed and he’s hiding. When he’s under the bed he sees someone walk across the room in black boots.

 Gurjit: We could have the antagonist kidnap the son, and we see this through a CCTV camera.

Zahra: We have to decide whether it is going to be linear or non-linear. It is going to be linear with elements of being non-linear.

 Gurjit: How are we going to conceal the bomb?

Zahra: We could have the bombs in a black bag and it having a small ticking sound.

 Dilly: He could receive a phone call from Damon.

Gurjit: Everything is normal even in his drinking state. Our antagonist is happy with his daughter and they are living his life. Jason is drink driving and causes a crash with Damons car and kills his daughter. Attempt to repair the damage where Jason tries to bring Damon to justice.

 Dilly: What other ideas could we include?

Gurjit: He has one goal.